The Bottle

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  1. Cloudwalker

    Cloudwalker The genuine, original, one and only Cloudwalker Staff Member

    The Bottle
    Psalm 56:8​

    I stand before the throne.
    The tears run down my face.
    The occupant of the throne knows well
    The stains upon my face.

    He doesn’t speak a word.
    And I’m afraid to look.
    I’m ashamed to stand before him.
    Afraid for all I’ve done.

    Silently He reaches out to me
    And pulls me to His side.
    There’s a smile upon His face
    And tears within His eyes.

    Quietly He reaches out
    And takes a bottle from nearby
    I see it is not empty,
    And I pause to wonder why.

    He holds the bottle to my face
    And catches every tear.
    As He gently pulls me close
    And whispers in my ear.

    “Your tears are most dear to me.
    I’ve saved them, every one.
    For I sent my Son to die for you.
    You’re my own. My precious one.”


    _____ _____​
    ____David E. Cloud____​
    (12/5/14)​


    unpublished work David Cloud 2014 used by permission
     
  2. Graceblest

    Graceblest Member

    Wow, David!

    That is magnificent!
     
  3. Timothy

    Timothy Administrator Staff Member

    Isn't it though? I loved it...
     
  4. Cloudwalker

    Cloudwalker The genuine, original, one and only Cloudwalker Staff Member

    Side story. When this was read on Christmas morning (I have put all my poems in a book and each Christmas give the new poems as updated pages [Gracey, have yours from last year and this year and will send them shortly] and when they get opened up we read them) my sister told me that I had written it for her. It was the first Christmas that my niece, her daughter, wasn't there (she was at her in-laws that year).
     
  5. Gracie

    Gracie Member

    Awesome Poem CloudWalker!
     

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