Hope of the Heart

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  1. Liquid Tension

    Liquid Tension No, it's NOT a fish!!!

    Battled insomnia last night, and ended up writing lyrics to a song. This is the closing chorus to it.



    Hope of the Heart

    Hope of the heart is the most powerful thing
    It’s the patience to wait for a special love
    It can sustain you through a love that’s lost
    It’s looking in the eyes of your own reflection
    It’s the thread you hold on to
    It’s the strength to stay when he walks away
    It’s the strength to cry when she says goodbye
    It’s the will to stand when you want to fall
    It’s the key that opens your heart

    It’s all about love, it’s all for love
    It’s all about love, it’s all for love

    Lyrics ~ S. Sayers
     
  2. TomH

    TomH Well-Known Member

    :l:;
     
  3. פNIʞƎƎS

    פNIʞƎƎS Connoisseur of Memes Staff Member

    Very nice.
     
  4. Cloudwalker

    Cloudwalker The genuine, original, one and only Cloudwalker Staff Member

    Most of the time my writing poems/song lyrics keeps me awake not a product of sleeplessness. Still, however it was done it works good.
     
  5. Liquid Tension

    Liquid Tension No, it's NOT a fish!!!

    There's a whole lot more stuff I've could've written, but usually when I get ideas in my head, I'm at that point where I'm trying/need to get to sleep, so I try to repeat in my mind thinking I'll remember it when I wake up. Very rarely happens that way. It's normally gone by that time.

    My friend always tells me, no matter when the idea comes, just write it down. I should listen to him more. ;.;.
     
  6. Cloudwalker

    Cloudwalker The genuine, original, one and only Cloudwalker Staff Member

    I keep a notebook and pen by my bed for just such cases. Most time when I get a line/idea I have an idea where in the poem it goes, but not always. When the muse hits I turn my light on, wright it down, then try to go back to sleep. (Often failing because another idea comes as soon as I get relaxed. So it's turn light one, etc.)
     
  7. Liquid Tension

    Liquid Tension No, it's NOT a fish!!!

    Yeah, I should just get up and write down stuff, no matter when it is the muse awakens. Never know what good ideas may come out of it.
     
  8. RabbiKnife

    RabbiKnife Open the pod bay door, please HAL. Staff Member

    Rare muse hit last night

    Verse 1
    Outside of the city
    There's a party in the street
    Palm fronds and robes and coats
    Laid down at his feet
    Hosanna in the highest
    The crowd is heard to say
    They are shouting and singing and dancing...
    But Jesus weeps.
    (Instrumental turn around)

    Verse 2
    Murder in the streets
    Violence in our homes
    Danger in our neighborhoods
    Danger in the womb
    Safe within our churches
    Comfortable and at ease
    We are shouting and singing and dancing
    While Jesus weeps

    Bridge
    Let me dance when you dance
    Let me cry when you cry
    Let me see this world
    Through your eyes

    Let me shout when you shout
    Let me praise when you praise
    Let me see this world
    Through your eyes
    (Instrumental turnaround)

    Verse 3
    The homeless on the street
    The helpless in our schools
    Afraid with a hard brave face
    Lonely in a crowded place
    Take us from our comfort zone
    Help us live through You alone
    Loving and serving and weeping
    When Jesus weeps
     
  9. Liquid Tension

    Liquid Tension No, it's NOT a fish!!!

    ^^^^Nice!!!
     

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